Should cellphone be banned at school?
This paragraph is about an idea, why can cell phones be banned in school
I agree cell phones can be banned in school because some people are being addicted to social media like facebook, messenger, Instagram, twitter, and others. In the long run of using cell phones, they are late to sleep. Cell Phones can distract us from our school because instead, we are learning new lessons, we are concerned more about cell phone usage.
In a long run using cell phones, we’re not able to focus on our school works. So it’s our choice if we’re gonna do the right time of using our mobile’s and we also need to choose a good way of using it.
In cell phones we can use the calendar to identify what date it is, you can also use the calendar and write some works or what you are going to do on that day. We can use our phones to call our parents and friends when we need to, we can also chat or text them using our phones.
Cell phones may not be prohibited from school, because others have important reasons. Some people are just making a reason even if it’s not important, but most of them have an important reason.
I disagree because sometimes we might have important reasons. An important reason can be their parent will call them anytime but they couldn’t answer it because they are not allowed to use phones.
When we banned cellphones in school, they can be a disadvantage because even though they have mobile phones they can still go to school and try to study. Sometimes when we banned cellphones it is possible to lose their energy in school even though cell phones can be their reason to be happy.
In conclusion, maybe cell phones are allowed in school because we can learn a lot of information from our phones. Cellphones can be allowed in school and just use it in a right time.
This paragraph is about an idea, why can cell phones be banned in school
I agree cell phones can be banned in school because some people are being addicted to social media like facebook, messenger, Instagram, twitter, and others. In the long run of using cell phones, they are late to sleep. Cell Phones can distract us from our school because instead, we are learning new lessons, we are concerned more about cell phone usage.
In a long run using cell phones, we’re not able to focus on our school works. So it’s our choice if we’re gonna do the right time of using our mobile’s and we also need to choose a good way of using it.
In cell phones we can use the calendar to identify what date it is, you can also use the calendar and write some works or what you are going to do on that day. We can use our phones to call our parents and friends when we need to, we can also chat or text them using our phones.
Cell phones may not be prohibited from school, because others have important reasons. Some people are just making a reason even if it’s not important, but most of them have an important reason.
I disagree because sometimes we might have important reasons. An important reason can be their parent will call them anytime but they couldn’t answer it because they are not allowed to use phones.
When we banned cellphones in school, they can be a disadvantage because even though they have mobile phones they can still go to school and try to study. Sometimes when we banned cellphones it is possible to lose their energy in school even though cell phones can be their reason to be happy.
In conclusion, maybe cell phones are allowed in school because we can learn a lot of information from our phones. Cellphones can be allowed in school and just use it in a right time.
W.A.L.T We need to use persuasive writing
What I found easy: Is to think about the information but what I found hard: Is when I'm gonna compose a sentence...
I'm not a good writer but I've tried my best to do it:)
Hello Dannah,
ReplyDeleteI really like your persuasive writing, it has a lot of facts and reason about phones, but I got confused if you want Phones banned or not. Maybe next time you should add complex sentences. other than that Nicely done.
Hi Nathan,
DeleteFirst of all thank you for sending me feedback.Thanks for saying what I need to put or add next time. You said you got confused if I want Phones be banned or not, I am saying that I agree and I disagree because I had both reason for it...Btw thanks again for commenting on my Blog..I really appreciated it..
-Dannah